Great stories!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the compliments for my story! I made this new post so that the comments weren't so long on the other ones, but you should still check the other ones just in case. Fabulous Fabulae everyone just fabulous.
Sincerely,
Marmalade
16 Comments:
Joe you should post more! I know i sure would read it.
Yeah I noticed that sarah but there isn't really anything I think of that is bad about them. Yours kind of reminds me of series of unfortunate events or the twin in the tavern but its still interesting and from the other stuff I read its not at all like those books later on.
Sarah what i look for in a book is characters that are accually cool and you like them. An interestin setting and cool stuff to happen adn yours sucseeds in all of those so for me your story is top notch. I think you begiinning is swell but i would like to hear the other ones all the same. Is there anything critical about mine, and i want you guys to be as cristical as you want because i want serious feedback.
Rosey you just have a knack for writing stories about little critters. You know the chipkey one was good and this one is....Fabulous! haha Yeah you have some sweet dialogue skills. Cool.
Roc but what about all the little critters? you can't leave them in there distress. You should finish it because it good real good!
Roc but what about all the little critters? you can't leave them in there distress. You should finish it because it good real good!
sorry dudes i diodn't mean to leave it twice.
Ehehehehe Rosey were you just messing around again or is that story for real? heheh
I think it is intriguing in a strange sort of way. ARe you trying to get the mesage acrss that her life is boring? Or what? Well since you have a great idea for it i want to read your ingenious works.
Charity do you have any more stories?
julie's right it is intriguing in a strange way.
Hey do you guys have any criticism for my story? Don't be afraid to say anything. ANYTHING!!! heheh yeah just tell the truth how you feel about it.
uh rosey can i ask you something? What in the world is wrong with this girl? No im just kidding. I want to read more i want to see what you plan is.
hahaha joe you are hilarious....I mean Joe! How dare you make fun of rosey!!!! haha jk. Yes I have heard of aly and aj rosey.
whats so excellent about hearing about aly and aj rosey?
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh....thanks!
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