Story time!!!!!!!!!!
I made this new post just so that the comment thing on the other one wasn't so huge. But you can still put comments on it. Well here is more of my story.
Thomas and the Magic Valley
By Maryann Christensen
Prologue
Once upon a time there was a magical valley where everything had a bit of magic in it, from the tall trees down to the tiny pebbles. The people that lived there respected the land and tried as hard as they could not to pollute it. But soon, there came a group of people who chopped the trees and stole the magic out of them. They stored all the magic in small sticks that came off the trees. Then they used the magic to harm people and steal their possessions. The trees soon became regular trees and the magic in everything else soon disappeared. At first people were sad because of this great loss, but after a few decades everyone got used to it. The sticks that had the magic in them were passed down from generation to generation. The people named them "wands" and the people that used them became known as wizards.
Chapter the First
"Thomas!"
Thomas looked up from his schoolwork and out the window. Outside it was a perfect day, blue sky, green grass, and he was stuck inside doing arithmetic. The head of a young girl was looking at him from the window.
"What do you want Verana?" Thomas whispered to his sister. "Don’t you understand that I have to finish my arithmetic before I can play?"
"No! I mean yes I understand but this is important ..." Verana said but Thomas interrupted.
"It may be important to you but needing another person to play crow ball doesn’t seem that important to me."
"Oh alright. Just try to hurry up please!" she said and popped back out the window. Thomas chuckled and went back to his work.
"Ok ... 67 times 23 is....oh what is it," Thomas mumbled.
"Thomas!"
"Verana, I can’t finish my math in two seconds you know. Stop bothering me," Thomas said without looking up. There was no reply. Thomas looked up and saw that Verana wasn’t there. He stood up and looked out the window. Verana was walking across the field; she couldn’t have run away that fast.
"Weird." Thomas went back to doing his work.
"Ok 67 times 23 is 1541." Thomas jotted it down.
"Thomas!"
"Who’s there?" Thomas asked. He didn’t recognize the voice.
"Come to the Borgenam Woods tonight at midnight and you will find out," the voice said. Thomas looked around and didn’t see anyone. The hair on the back of his neck rose. He took one more glance around and went back to his work.
"I must be hearing things," he reassured himself.
"Thomas!"
It sounded more urgent this time.
"What do you want?" Thomas whispered. His mouth had gone dry.
"Come to the Borgenam Woods tonight at midnight and you will find out."
Thomas and the Magic Valley
By Maryann Christensen
Prologue
Once upon a time there was a magical valley where everything had a bit of magic in it, from the tall trees down to the tiny pebbles. The people that lived there respected the land and tried as hard as they could not to pollute it. But soon, there came a group of people who chopped the trees and stole the magic out of them. They stored all the magic in small sticks that came off the trees. Then they used the magic to harm people and steal their possessions. The trees soon became regular trees and the magic in everything else soon disappeared. At first people were sad because of this great loss, but after a few decades everyone got used to it. The sticks that had the magic in them were passed down from generation to generation. The people named them "wands" and the people that used them became known as wizards.
Chapter the First
"Thomas!"
Thomas looked up from his schoolwork and out the window. Outside it was a perfect day, blue sky, green grass, and he was stuck inside doing arithmetic. The head of a young girl was looking at him from the window.
"What do you want Verana?" Thomas whispered to his sister. "Don’t you understand that I have to finish my arithmetic before I can play?"
"No! I mean yes I understand but this is important ..." Verana said but Thomas interrupted.
"It may be important to you but needing another person to play crow ball doesn’t seem that important to me."
"Oh alright. Just try to hurry up please!" she said and popped back out the window. Thomas chuckled and went back to his work.
"Ok ... 67 times 23 is....oh what is it," Thomas mumbled.
"Thomas!"
"Verana, I can’t finish my math in two seconds you know. Stop bothering me," Thomas said without looking up. There was no reply. Thomas looked up and saw that Verana wasn’t there. He stood up and looked out the window. Verana was walking across the field; she couldn’t have run away that fast.
"Weird." Thomas went back to doing his work.
"Ok 67 times 23 is 1541." Thomas jotted it down.
"Thomas!"
"Who’s there?" Thomas asked. He didn’t recognize the voice.
"Come to the Borgenam Woods tonight at midnight and you will find out," the voice said. Thomas looked around and didn’t see anyone. The hair on the back of his neck rose. He took one more glance around and went back to his work.
"I must be hearing things," he reassured himself.
"Thomas!"
It sounded more urgent this time.
"What do you want?" Thomas whispered. His mouth had gone dry.
"Come to the Borgenam Woods tonight at midnight and you will find out."
20 Comments:
JK Rowling style...oooh. thanks
Guys what do you think of the title
The Teapot That Spoke Words
no no no I was taking it as a compliment. oooh like oohs and awes. And julie nice title since i've never heard it before :) jk. Every time I'm going to write the next chapter I can't think of what to write. But maybe maybe.
Charity yours is very interesting and funny. i like it
Thanks for the complimeants on the title. Charity your story is full of character, i like it! you should defienetly pursue writing as a proffesion.....hehe.
Cool stuff guys!
I worte more on my story but it is really long so i am going to email it to all of you and you can post your feedback on here. See ya.
Sweet I'll check my email. I wrote more on mine too so i'll send it to you guys to if you want.
Sweet! Totally girlfriend! I want to read more on yours writerwrong i want to read the whole thing! yeah.........
hehe. I want to read more on yours Marmalade. And Writerwrong evreryones!
oh julie........
thanks you guys. you are too kind. Charity what is the tiger club?
Joe your story is really interesting. Your good at describing things, I can visualize it all. Is there more of it?
Gee guys thanks for the comments. Joe you story is coolio. Is this part of the master story you told me about? It is really interesting.
thanks! :D
Oh sarah you shouldn't have:-) I thank you all for your compliments but i don't think it could get published. Well we'll see. Writerwrong have you written more n=on your story, or charity? Cause if you have a have been annticipateng reading them!
cool stuff guys!
Sarah you are a genuis pure genuis. I like the names and you have good word choices.
oh yeah I like the name too. Its very intriguing.
sarah sarah sarah your story is very intersting you accually feel for the characters the setting is so awesome! but just to give you some critical feedback it reminded me a tad bit of series of unfotunate events. But there nothing really wrong with that series of unfrotunate events are freakin interesting and so is yours!
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